Script - draft

First scene - theatre 

Mr Nye - "And the winner is... JACK MILLWARD!"

*Clapping and whistling edited in* 

Jack "I am just so surprised to win this award..."

(Cuts to Jack in the car)

Second scene - series of short jump cuts (highlighting his career)

Narrator "This year!"

Jack "Welcome explorers"  

(Jack narration of speech overlaid over the series of quick jump cuts)

"First of I want to thank my fans and my family, without this none of this would ever be possible. 

I'm sorry I am a bit emotional, I never expected this to happen, I haven't even planned a speech (stuttery/emotional)

I have been through a lot, not just in my exploring experiences but in life in general and to get to where I am today I am so happy and thankful to everyone who has supported me or ever watched any of my videos.

Narrator "His biggest adventure ever!"

Third scene - Abandoned building

Jack "I've heard this place hasn't been touched in roughly 20 years, because of the high level of paranormal activity that has happened"

"This place is so creepy"

"We come peacefully"

"So, explorers, the aim of todays video is to show you Appuldurcome House to really see if all these rumours and accusations are true, let's get into it..."

"What the fuck was that!?"

Shaun (me) "I honestly think we should leave"

As we are working in partners, we have both decided to do a draft script and then discuss the good things out of both our scripts and then do a final script which will actually be used for the trailer. This is the best way of doing it as our imagery will both vary and then we can discuss the best of both of the scripts which will make it the best possible.